中文病句修改——用词不当 Chinese Sentence Correction – Improper Use of Words|汉语学习资料库

zhōng wén bìng jù xiū gǎi
中文病句修改
Chinese Sentence Correction

yòng cí bù dàng
用词不当
Improper Use of Words

Wrong:
wǒ xiǎng jié hūn yí gè piào liang nǚ hái .
我想结婚一个漂亮女孩。
I want to marry a beautiful girl.

Correct:
wǒ xiǎng hé yí gè piào liang nǚ hái jié hūn .
我想和一个漂亮女孩结婚。
I want to marry a beautiful girl.

Correct:
wǒ xiǎng qǔ yí gè piào liàng nǚ hái .
我想娶一个漂亮女孩。
I want to marry a beautiful girl.

Wrong:
zhōu mò wǒ yào qù cān guān nǎi nai .
周末我要去参观奶奶。
I’m going to visit grandma this weekend.

Correct:
zhōu mò wǒ yào qù tàn wàng nǎi nai .
周末我要去探望奶奶。
I’m going to visit grandma this weekend.

Wrong:
tā de nǎi nai zhù yuàn bàn nián hòu zhōng yú qù shì le , tā hěn shāng xīn .
他的奶奶住院半年后终于去世了,他很伤心。
His grandma finally passed away after half a year in the hospital, and he was very sad.

Correct:
tā de nǎi nai zhù yuàn bàn nián hòu bú xìng qù shì le , tā hěn shāng xīn .
他的奶奶住院半年后不幸去世了,他很伤心。
His grandma passed away unfortunately after half a year in the hospital, and he was very sad.

Wrong:
wǒ men lǎo shī shì yí gè lǎo nǚ rén .
我们老师是一个老女人。
Our teacher is an old woman.

Correct:
wǒ men lǎo shī shì yí wèi nián zhǎng de nǚ shì .
我们老师是一位年长的女士。
Our teacher is an older lady.

Wrong:
lǎo shī , nǐ lǎo gōng zài měi guó ma ?
老师,你老公在美国吗?
Teacher, is your husband in America?

Correct:
lǎo shī , nín xiān shēng zài měi guó ma ?
老师,您先生在美国吗?
Teacher, is your husband in America?